Comments on: Hungry, Focused and Determined: The Ducks Will Beat Arizona State http://uosportsdude.com/2009/11/13/hungry-focused-and-determined-the-ducks-will-beat-arizona-state/ Where Sports and College Humor Collide Fri, 30 Jul 2010 21:37:08 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Keith Becker http://uosportsdude.com/2009/11/13/hungry-focused-and-determined-the-ducks-will-beat-arizona-state/comment-page-1/#comment-107 Keith Becker Sat, 14 Nov 2009 20:35:59 +0000 http://uosportsdude.com/?p=481#comment-107 Always appreciate the constructive criticism. Changes made. Always appreciate the constructive criticism. Changes made.

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]]> By: gamedaytribe http://uosportsdude.com/2009/11/13/hungry-focused-and-determined-the-ducks-will-beat-arizona-state/comment-page-1/#comment-106 gamedaytribe Sat, 14 Nov 2009 01:39:50 +0000 http://uosportsdude.com/?p=481#comment-106 Enjoy reading your blog! That said, I'm first going to get on your case (as your professed desire is to provide "well-written articles") about your blog post writing. The following is the writing equivalent of a fumble or a dropped pass or a missed tackle: "they played wore us down and" Also, on your "coming off of the loss". Eeek. Ugly. Just make it "coming off the loss." Attention to detail. Excellence. We want it of our players. We should hold ourselves to the same standards. Your readers will expect it of you, if you have any desire to be Good. Agree with you on this one, the Ducks are going to make it ugly quickly. At least I hope so, else it's going to be a long night that's going to require a lot of tequila. Enjoy reading your blog!

That said, I’m first going to get on your case (as your professed desire is to provide “well-written articles”) about your blog post writing.

The following is the writing equivalent of a fumble or a dropped pass or a missed tackle:

“they played wore us down and”

Also, on your “coming off of the loss”. Eeek. Ugly. Just make it “coming off the loss.”

Attention to detail. Excellence. We want it of our players. We should hold ourselves to the same standards. Your readers will expect it of you, if you have any desire to be Good.

Agree with you on this one, the Ducks are going to make it ugly quickly. At least I hope so, else it’s going to be a long night that’s going to require a lot of tequila.

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